Is she a watty girl or smth? I dont know why they portray her as “plain, not like other girls”
This is so unrealistic and basic. I get that its a smut manga so people usually look for that but it still bothers me. Author trying to portray fl as cold killer like wow she’s so strong and so not like others?? So ml got bricked up etc. after she killed 4 people she went on with her life. That’s just so cringey to me like even if it’s a smut manga its so iritating to see it. I have seen a smut author who wrote the murderer anxiety and psychology really well that’s why it bothers me to see it here
Would you please tell me which other smut you are refering to? I'm always on the lookout for smut with a well-written plot
“Rusty Quadrilateral“ tbh it was disturbing and really gloomy to me. I’m not saying it was the best but it portrayed the agony really good
Thank you for the recommendation
I just finished reading it in one go, I loved it! tysm
Oh I’m glad you liked it. Same author has another work named “ Ghost Tactic” maybe you would like to check that too
I'll check it out, thanks!
I noticed that from both stories we mostly see omegas getting excited and wanting it. I genuinely prefer when top yearns and shows it otherwise it feels like bottom one begged and top just said “meh” and gave it to them. Like you are holding ethereal beauty in your hands do it properly
+1. It's satisfying to see tops grovel.
I don’t think its about plot, its about how the author does it. I don’t like how ml rescued fl from that pervert. She was humiliated there and like always ml came to save her. To me, this is boring. Why does she need her problems to get solved by ml? (The one she can’t trust fully as you say) I agree that the plot is really interesting and it should be slowburn. But we are not seeing any progress either (I’m not talking about psychical attraction) slowburn only gets good when we see a progress of the story.
Cant they just have sex? Its not even a slowburn anymore like its getting to a point where its awfully boring. And she is treating him like a dog like I’m tired fr
LOL my thoughts exactly …
I agree….whole heartedly!!
Naw fr. I need a smut scene soon bruh or it’s going to the marination pile.
I hope author knows that killing that man wouldn’t make this webtoon a masterpiece. Not every story needs a bad ending. He clearly suffered by being an idol, he deserves a good life.
IS HE GONNA DIE
He has a disease in the early chapter it says that he only has one year to live
PLEASEEEEE MOREEEEE I WANT LUKA COUFFAINE I WANT SMUT THIS CANT ME OVERRRRRRR
Dude I need her to do the wolfie so bad Idgaf about priest and the fish i want the wolfie.
REAALLL
I like fl but I don’t think author makes s scenes that good. Its feels rushed and very superficial. I don’t feel the tension between fl and ml either. Ml is written as if he’s a side character honestly