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*INCOMING RANT LOL*

First and foremost I really loved this story!! I love a non toxic relationship where the couple actually talks to each other and they are really in love with each other as well. The MC and The ML are adorable and I even enjoyed the side couple with the friend and the brother. That being said, I really believe this story could have been rapped up in about 30 chapters lol. There was alot of filler plot, which made the story kinda boring and it felt like it was just lagging a bit. Even the spicy scenes felt like filler, cause it was the same thing over and over. To be fair though, I feel like that has more to do with the art style. Even though I really love the art, i don't think the author really knows how to draw facial emotion.... the characters literally have the same face throughout the entire story lol. Other that that I really liked the story!! I think most people find the story hard to follow because the translation it not that good (...no hate to the translator) but I read the actual raws and they obviously make wayyy more sense lol.

*side note* If haeboms dumb ass mother knows how to sense "bad from good " why couldn't she sense haeboms aggy ass father was a fuxxing asshole? and why did she have a baby from him???

4.5/5 <3 <3 <3