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First off, pretty good plot overall. I liked how angsty and unpredictable the plot was HOWEVER, there were just some glaring issues ab the yeon lady (I will call her EB from now on (evil bitch))
This ENTIRE disaster could’ve been pretty much nullified with a simple paternity test, I MEANNNNN DONT RICH PPL LOVE DAT SHIT ???? Plus down to the end we never truly understood the motivation behind EB’s malicious intent even before her going down this sick and twisted power grab. Basically what I’m trying to say is nothing truly made sense in the context of the plot which is disappointing to say the least bc the premise of the plot is so interesting and the characters are truly so beautiful.
NOW, for a Korean bl this shit was some good ass soup don’t get me wrong. Definitely worth the read if ur on the fence about it. It was so close to being payback level good (not really, maybe if they dialed down the sex and focused on the plot). In short, authors need to make villains actually smart and calculating instead of just giving them a gun and a bunch of hit men. And also, maybe not to base the entire premise of your story around something that can be resolved (in the real world) by some 23 and me bullshit. 8.5/10 PEACE
There’s this yaoi (I think it’s a manhwa) but it was like historical/martial arts based but unlike the usual they bone pretty quick but I forgot it and it’s now a fixation. SOMEONE PLZ. I cannot tell you more TT (goldfish brain)
bad friend?
BOOM SHAKA LAKAAA YESS GAWDDD
funny how i literally asked for it like 4 questions below you LMAO
Yooo someone plzzzzz pick this up ts tew good or if anyone got the rams pass em my way I BEG