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loved the characters, they have their own problems and ways of dealing with certain situations that make this work so real and interesting.
I really loved everything, I just didn't like the part where uke starts to theorize and get into his own head how seme feels or doesn't feel, like saying "you're not gay, you don't like me, that's an illusion" even though the seme was stating that he likes him.
Oh, not that I don't understand why he did it, really after everything he's been through it's understandable why he's feeling this way, he didn't want another disappointment, he was afraid of opening up, of loving someone else.
but personally I just hate people who assume other people's things or feelings without knowing anything... or maybe I'm too sensitive about these things lol
Anyway, this work was wonderful, I highly recommend it. rating: 10/10