beta
two pages of a new side story and it’s already better than the whole plot of this mess… can’t the author see how easier it is to sympathise and root for a character (daiki) when they’re not a toxic p1ece of sh#t?
author can clearly see it if they wrote it themselves
I really thought the quality of this would be similar to The Summer Hikaru Died, but it feels bland and every chapter feels the same. Couldn’t the author describe his misogyny differently?