Really good overall , one HUGE compliment… didn’t show them fucking. I know I can be a gooner sometimes and yeah not all story’s need to have sex…. BUT I wanted to see them do the devils tango . Once again, very good story loved it , but come on man.(〜￣△￣)〜
Theres a part 2 short series of this with the scenes you are looking for :) look in the authors other works section
3rd time I’ve read this… it never gets old
This BL is so bad, but I reread it like 5 times Time for a 6th reread after a year, my guilty pleasure atp
Do NOT try this it doesn’t work the way it worked in this…. Definitely not speaking from experience
Okay okay, not the worst I’ve read but definitely not the best. I feel the eating disorder arch was definitely not needed, I feel someone who is so proud of his sport would never gain that mind set. Felt so bad for him especially since the author wrote him like that. The bottom definitely pissed me off at times. The smex scenes were good and enjoyable but definitely over used especially when they would be misunderstanding each other.
Started off super well written, then BAM they suddenly became …normal ? Like I get that they both are kinda messed up in the head but the sudden switch up was out of nowhere. I would’ve loved to see the top continue to be obsessive and crazy but maybe a tad bit more soft with some healthy development with the bottom. And don’t get me started on how fast the bottom, suddenly was okay with what was going on… crazy. Only enjoyed reading this for the artwork and the first few chapters before they got lobotomies .
(︶︿︶)＝凸
a good long read… but that ended was rushed and left plot holes wide open… like maybe give us a few more chapters of them getting back to feeling used to each other again…
wow someone grab that red string and strangle me with it…. WHY CANT THEY JUST BE HAPPY TOGETHER
Rightttttt
Was NOT expecting that