Okay okay, not the worst I’ve read but definitely not the best. I feel the eating disorder arch was definitely not needed, I feel someone who is so proud of his sport would never gain that mind set. Felt so bad for him especially since the author wrote him like that. The bottom definitely pissed me off at times. The smex scenes were good and enjoyable but definitely over used especially when they would be misunderstanding each other.
Started off super well written, then BAM they suddenly became …normal ? Like I get that they both are kinda messed up in the head but the sudden switch up was out of nowhere. I would’ve loved to see the top continue to be obsessive and crazy but maybe a tad bit more soft with some healthy development with the bottom. And don’t get me started on how fast the bottom, suddenly was okay with what was going on… crazy. Only enjoyed reading this for the artwork and the first few chapters before they got lobotomies .
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Do NOT try this it doesn’t work the way it worked in this…. Definitely not speaking from experience