I'd also go crazy with all those spacing errors. I read along punctuations, which means that no punctuations = rush and breathless. It's like, why are you rushing me? Why are you rambling?
I'm not gonna print out spacing manuals though, lol
It depends on language. Like for Chinese it's a characters have meaning and spacing and punctuation makes no difference so everything is squished together sometimes. It bothers me cz it's brain overload of a second language but for ppl with it as their first language it's probably easily understandable and still correct.
Is it just me or did he kinda get manipulated into dating Jiha? That man's scary cause that look in his eyes? That's serial killer/yandere eyes.
Before I began to read, I thought it would like how readers talk about the dad in all tropes like this.
I admit I was wrong. I'm literally rattling the bars of my cage like a rabid animal to get to Vivian's dad. Like damn, gimme that hottie
Uh, well, that was something. I thought that he had died for sure, but apparently not? Someone said the author confirmed that he just spent 50 years wandering, not knowing that she got saved.
The ending is so unsatisfactory, there are so many gaps in the plot. There is no way THIS would be the conclusion. This feels like how Sherlock was killed off but had to be brought back cause the author was forced. There is no way this is the ending the author wanted, especially with how Chapter 1 began.
In my personal head cannon, this would be after death, reunited in afterlife.
I swear to god, these misunderstandings between these two will drive me insane. It's just one thing after another. I wanna grab these two and force them to talk because at this point, what are they even doing