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I like to think she lost her powers cause the god of that world saw how nasty her heart was and just took their blessings away from her
“Oh, the girl I sent to bring light and peace to my world! Let me see how she’s holding up. Oh… oh my. This is… disgusting. Her heart has blackened beyond repair by her own hand, she’s no longer the child I blessed in her mothers womb.”
Bestie, that's exactly what happened (￣∇￣") he even took away her blessing slowly so that she'd have time to change ways and repent but... you see how that went
If your characters story can only progress/is being progressed by rape, you’re not a good writer.
While I understand, and can get behind a more psychological story can get away with this, but this is YAOI. A ROMANCE AT ITS CORE.
And the ML and MC’s relationship is only being progressed through lies, tampered medicine, and the MC autonomy being ignored without his knowledge, AND RAPE? Isn’t okay. Like— you can’t express the ML’s possessiveness and obsession without that? Really? You can’t challenge yourself?