The premise was intriguing and seemed worthwhile! However, upon further reading, I saw that the translations are terrible; From grammar to the very storyline, it’s a mess. Not to mention, the latest updates, chapter 14-15, are not of the original story.
I appreciate that a group is attempting to translate, clean, redraw, and all that, it’s A LOT of work. BUT, it becomes fruitless and off putting for the very audience/readers you’re trying to present to if there aren’t proper editors and those fluent in the language they’re translating to.
Maybe one day this story will be properly translated, or perhaps even officially licensed! If so, I will absolutely read it, but until then this will be a disappointment and on the very back 6 of my mind.
I am more than pleased that arrogant, uneducated, narcissistic b*tch will suffer by drowning. ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Drowning is terrifying as I have experienced it to a minor extent when I was a kid. The feeling of inhaling water, your lungs spasming, and choking while trying to grasp for anything in reach is no joke. Drowning is one of the worst ways to go in my opinion, I just hope hers will be eternal. She is not someone who will learn and that’s just the reality of her character.
I really like story #2. Rugby is a seriously strenuous and extremely athletic sport. It takes a lot of guts and power, but at the same time players must be diligent to not seriously injure themselves. Anyways, I really hate it when people stereotype. A person can like anything they want. Besides, those other asshole members should know better than anyone how great a rugby player Himeno-san is. Liking a teddy bear doesn’t, won’t, and can’t change that either. Also, I think it’s great that Himeno-san enjoys cute things! I can tooooootally relate! Too bad he’s gay, I’d for sure date him, lol.
I see a lot of comments chastising the FL, but I can see why she didn’t try to justify herself. From the moment Rico saw that man hovering over Stacia, he didn’t believe/trust her. Rico made it so there was no room to spare for “excuses”. Many times, dealing with a person like that you aren’t given any choice, but to leave. It’s also difficult when Rico hadn’t opened up at all to Stacia. How could she have known about his poverty and hunger stricken childhood? Woth such great struggle and strong passion to protect one’s family, it seems only natural to believe in your family’s opinions too. However, Rico isn’t the only one at fault either. Yes, Stacia should have been more proactive in trying to get her perspective and desires across to Rico. Having and maintaining honest communication is a key component for healthy relationships.
Anyways, blah blah blah~ this is a Harlequin story so I’m sure many details were edited out to keep with the deadline and page limit.






This story had a really interesting start and uh, let’s just say I REALLY REAALY, don like the ending. It feels way too open ended-scratch that, the story doesn’t even feel finished! It gives me the impression that the author either didn’t want to continue this project or their publishing company suddenly gave them a cap on # of chapters.
I’m so disappointed cuz this story did have potential…