translation after the FIRST chapter gets really bad, and very noticable
imo it has so much drama, it's a literal soap opera and in some parts i think its so fcking stupid, like oh ok thats happening now
i don't really like the fact that she looks like the guys sister, and then he INSTANTLY crushes on her/is flustered by her body???? it kept coming up in my head its just wild
i want to say it tied up nicely, but damn i did get bored
At 81 chapters, I would say its complete in my book since everything in the main story is wrapped up. (imo)
fl: i found her quite strong, because she has strong values that don't waver in "love" or "hatred" in the story. Sometimes i felt like she was a bit boring, and that she didn't use her power enough whatsoever, for the plot haha.
Ml: he gen regrets and reflects, however I don't like how his Obsessiveness/ possessiveness stays until the very end. The purple hair girl and the yellow haired dragon are supposed to reflect/mirror fl and ml
i like that they kill characters, i think fl is a bit plain in terms of personality. Like i know she has them, but it feels like traits you would give an oc? There's a scene where ml gives her a gift of books, and he assumes she loves studying, but she says i guess you never really knew me anyways..
BUT IT NEVER REALLY SHOWS WHAT SHE ACTUALLY LIKES TO THE READER? Maybe i never picked up on it, but the only times shes shown as happy is with ml. And i remember at the start of the story she wanted to create a happiness and her own life without ml. so... but maybe new chapters will change it. (⊙…⊙ )










nothing happens, she knows the future but she lets it play out? the only difference is that she responds perfectly to the blonde guy, but like cmon. I quite like that shes timid, but she also doesn't tell anyone what she knows?… like is she gonna tell them at the end of the story when the threats gone
also all that fast paced romance wws so random imo. i also dont think they flesh out the villains facade properly, also a really clear second villain whos actually pulling the strings if you want something easy to read just read this
i like she doesnt try to gain power or her own footing/ppl besides people who are already tied to royalty, her maid doesnt count…
and scratch what i said about the timid part bc she uddenly picks up a sword and they say shes a natural bc shes an heir it would mean more in the story if she WASNT, and show the viewers how shes working hard to protect her ppl…
instead shes afk kissing her bf
someone needs to report her for trolling
(i feel like only the start is realistic, her being scared of him and choking up, but they lowk fkced that up too)