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Ngl, but that plot twist felt like it came out of nowhere. There was no build-up to it, and worse, it's in the epilogue. It felt very much like an after thought.

I re-read it to see if there were any clues alluding to the twist, but nothing ever really stood out. The only thing I noticed was the flower one in the first chapter. It's all I got.