It's Good, but not 5 star worthy good (according to me ) I loved the art at start , in middle it got...less good (not bad) , it improved a little again .
Things gets too confusing sometimes , and a bit less interesting in between (the tree area part)
But!!! It was good as well, many parts were interesting. The story is interesting and the pace isn't slow . Oh , and most importantly it doesn't have romance !!(yet)
I can't pinpoint what is bothering me , I was expecting something more from characters . And in between They throw a lot of random new information without much explanation
(it's making sense in later chapters )
I started it's novel 3 or4 yrs ago I guess , when this part came I had a huge breakdown like thing I was so into it and this broke something inside me , yeo Dan is my fav character (and their ship is for some reson my fav. I even have it as my pfp and username for years)
He also reminds me of my bf (he's tall and cute silent type as well , just not selfless and Is childish sometimes , he asks like it's his right, cut off that person I don't like them , obviously it's my decision to do so or not, and i got him after i dropped this )
So Dan I's thoughts and reaction are frustrating to me , I mean , not all relationships start 2 sided , one loves more, other learns slowly and develop feelings. They make this so complicated for no reson .
I guess I think like this because yeo Dan is my fav . Ignore it if it sounds stupid ┗( T﹏T )┛
Spoiler alert ( i dont remember much).
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Iana ia adopted .
After release she is imprisoned in his brother's house /home arrested/confined .
His brothers power is like brainwashing with eye contact or something. Iana guessed his powers doesn't work on her for some reasons , but turned out it did influenced her because she started getting wayy too comfortable in her confinement .
Her rose is blue (obviously) she is a very important being for them (idk why) that's why her brother confined her and brainwashed her ,to use her . Previous iana knew this and that's why she hated her brother and his fake personality.
After rickdorian rescue/kidnapped her a few times . And they starts findings clues and all I lost interest and dropped it so I don't know anything, it's been a few years
* Touches chin and neck*
"Are you hurt anywhere else?"
why do they do this ,it's cringe just like kissing hair and stuff ,ask normally !!
Yeah I don't think he's doing it because of romantic feelings. I think Kyon's idea that it's a way to see if the person is telling the truth is more likely. Also in this case you could make the argument that it's not a real person, after all she is trapped in a game. Maybe the developer(s) like cheesy romance scenes.
Honestly it's good (novel is better written) (manhwa art is....digestible if you take medicines)
I found this piece(novel) very lovely and one of my fav novels
Many people drop it cus of spoilers but I would like to believe it just didn't hit the target audience, I loved it and saw a few people loving it too , it pains me like its my own writing when people shit on it and leave
(it's their choice though ,no hate)
I hated it too after reading spoiler but thank God I didn't drop it
Why I like it:
1. No SA or r*pe but unfortunately confinement exists (the only Grey point for me)( I mean I love confinement and shit but... I have some sanity left in me )
2. Actual tyrant (chefs kiss)
3.PUNISHED ml !!!!! ( not just a regretful ml, not an punished ex but an ACTUAL. PUNISHED. ML.)
4. Good fl (neighter dumb nor OP smart) just right .
5. Not much plotholes (honestly I didn't really find any but you may so idk )
6. THE TENTION between the !!
7. 15+ novel (oh writer if only it was 18+...)
8.2nd endings for those who didn't like the first one
9. FL knows she's in love/or have feelings but isn't blinded/binded by it . Knows her shortcomings , has flaws and corrects it.
10. Idk I just love it .I'm ready to make a PowerPoint if you want (I'll defend it like my life depends on it)
Wtf do you think will happen when he catches her ?
Spoiler
He won't be killing her cus he likes her OBVIOUSLY that insane thing will do insane things (like he first thought should I cut off her leg or something my soul left reading that)
then he just keeps her in his secret bedroom. Doesn't even take a day she starts breaking and clinging like yk there's nothing here gimmie a book or something to kill time at least(she thought okay since hes not killing me and loves me maybe after some time i might love him too )....he's like "OMG she needs me" and ....leave her be locked there , without an ounce of entertainment and visits her once a day . Mc breaks and starts clinging onto him , develops stockhold syndrome. (though mc broke a bit too soon but okay )
I hated only this part in the novel like come on give her a book or something
He is hot as an undead too , i Hate the term zombie(green rotting brainteasers being , he feels more like a harmless vampire , cold,pale , can't taste food (he can eat ) heart doesnt beat , that's all and yes , can't feel pain and fully intelligent and conscious . But ml and FL both are immortal and live together ever after in 1800s 1900s typof world
In 2nd ending (it's actually "what would have happened if" type of ending) Mc returns to her own world after waking up from lake slumber (leaves reniero after ordering him to never kill anyone without reason or rule people by building a kingdom or something, as she has powers to control him now in both ending )
When FL fell asleep in lake , eden stayed to help the kingdom/empire [the actillus country fell and neighbouring (good) king took over it,that king was comrades with FL and eden , as he helped fl escape with eden and saintess]
He stayed for full 170yrs (he became immortal to in novel world just like FL so didn't age ) , then he returned to earth via temple ruins gate , eden and FL both were in coma when they transmigrates , eden woke up after 1.5 yr (I'm not sure about how many years) ,he's son of a politician , FL's body died after some year when she decided to stay in main ending. but woke up in 2nd ending , eden paid her bills (our broke MC) and they searched about truth of novel











But!!! The art!!! I have read the novel first , the appearance of these characters in imagination is top tier . The art doesn't do justice ...
Why does it always happen .....the novels I love never gets a good artstyle...