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ermm i know u made a bold move choosing to make tristan bottom so far into the story, and i'm glad it was well received by the readers. but i'm not sure u wanna risk it with this one, authornim, even though i know you're very much capable of it. with all due respect, we do not fucking want it. i get wren and tristan used be... pretty much in love with each other (side eye), but that was lifetimes ago. i sure hope you don't think we haven't moved on by now.
plus the whole thing just gave me a headache. do not let the guy sit on u like that??? aren't u hugging him a bit too tightly?? you're a married man. keep the most basic demeanor