beta
was thinking of pulling a "very complex" type of persona in the characters but failed to execute it thoroughly. I feel like reading a written novel made by highschool girl who has yet to experience life and yet to explore the world. It is so bland. I don't have an exact reason why I still read this honestly. It is just a pity that this could have been better if the plot didn't take the 'pure love operation' a literal translation of love being pure means it is difficult. Pure can be a delicate and incredibly sacrificing but it's not stuck. This storytelling makes me feel stuck.
I’ve been following it for so long, I just want to see how it ends when it FINALLY ends. I think some people really want this to be a deeper story than it is. The breakdowns of how one chapter mirrors another because it’s the same exact scene but drawn with different characters “means something” when it could just be the artist reusing assets and scenes because it’s a shortcut.
If people want to draw out why the story is “um actually so much deeper if you just reread it several times”, that’s cool. I just wish it was a good story without having to draw a big pin board of each chapter and how it “connects” or “proves” someone’s end game or someone else is the real “true pure love.”
Straight up to the truth.