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This is a good story, it just doesn’t work in this format. Waiting for an update every week sets up expectations that this type of story can’t deliver on. These types of dramatic stories that slowly unfurl as you discover more and more of the characters and the setting rely on the story being already completed. Else, we end up expecting some sort of action or development that this story isn’t really geared towards delivering.
It would work better as a tv show or a book.
I dunno I think people are just impatient these days I remember a time when you had to wait all week for your show and you couldn't pause it and if you missed the episode it was tough luck now you get whole seasons at once nobody is willing to wait and so having one chapter a week makes everyone cranky... (Now I feel like an old person shouting at young whippersnappers to get off my lawn )
In the novel, she went back to her old body as Penelope and pulled the plug, while her old family were begging her to stay. Did that happen here? I don’t remember seeing it
I read it LONG TIME AGO and remember she came back home so we actually got a closure with her brothers. I don’t know if it happened here neither.
Yeah all we saw here is her getting the blessing from her old self to stay, but I really want to see that closure with her irl brothers and dad
What closure are we talking about? They literally abused her whole life, just because they shared a few tears they should have closure? I’m glad she chose to stay with someone who actually cared about her. They only cared about her when she was on her deathbed. Fuck closure
Tell me you don’t understand closure without saying you don’t understand closure
Girlie pop she goes OFF on her irl fam. THATS the closure I wanted to see. She says fuck you I hated you all. It was extremely satisfying