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Yall im gonna be completely honest, it kinda feels like the plot was kinda written to justify the title lol
Esp the last part where Anna is like “ahh this is it… Roth and I… belong together… in the swans grave”
The MELODRAMA hahaha “what are we some kinda suicide squad” ahh moment
This is a good story, it just doesn’t work in this format. Waiting for an update every week sets up expectations that this type of story can’t deliver on. These types of dramatic stories that slowly unfurl as you discover more and more of the characters and the setting rely on the story being already completed. Else, we end up expecting some sort of action or development that this story isn’t really geared towards delivering.
It would work better as a tv show or a book.
I dunno I think people are just impatient these days I remember a time when you had to wait all week for your show and you couldn't pause it and if you missed the episode it was tough luck now you get whole seasons at once nobody is willing to wait and so having one chapter a week makes everyone cranky... (Now I feel like an old person shouting at young whippersnappers to get off my lawn )