This story isn't the strongest, but it is a cute little feel good story. There are barely any stakes, and i never felt a hint of anxiety the whole time even when it was SUPPOSED to seem scary. Honestly, it was a pretty weak little thing, but I liked it nonetheless. If you dont mind something light hearted with an incredibly mary sue mc, then give it a shot.
it was a solid 7.5/10 for me
To start things off, I do think the story is super unique and fun. It had an awesome ending, and they handled the characters super well! Our puppy ml was the apple of my eye, and its so nice to see a truly healthy relationship!
Honestly tho, it wasn't the closest to my cup of tea, and I found myself way more interested in the side couple. Aria is just my type of female lead, and she was so fun to read! I wish she got more screen time, or if this story was just about her, tho I guess the story wouldnt have been as striking or unique that way. Either way! Great read!
what the fuck is even happening. Like... what??????? Like wtf. Her personality just took a complete 180. Its almost like the author tried to fit ten different personalities in one person. She's immature and bland even after living two lives, and jesus fuck the plot holes. You mean to tell me that that noble guy just took in this dirty kid after she holds onto him all like "Dad :b." Like what??????? And suddenly she murders him, everyone knows, and she has absolutely NO repercussions? bruh. I feel like I'm reading some wattpad book written by a fifteen year old or some shit idk. Just... God the whiplash. I really wanna enjoy this cause fuck we finally get some strong MC with swordsmanship and OP power, but we didn't even get to see that progression or cheer her on. Mary Sue much?
Don't say some stuff like "dont like dont read" cause its completely fine if you enjoy this, and im entitled to my own opinion. Im just expressing disappointment after having high hopes :/
The MC is a little... disappointing. Idk his personality is so one dimensional and, quite frankly, kinda boring. Like, I love my OP MC as much as the next guy, given how I'm obsessed with Solo Leveling and Omniscient Reader's Perspective, but this guy is just so meh. No character development in 26 chapters and his personality is just so unlikable. I get why people like him, but I'm just kinda bored. Not gonna drop this just yet though. I'm curious to see if it gets any better ( ̄へ ̄)











Genuinely one of the most egregious mary sue's ive see in years, and god its so bad its good. If you want conflict, this is not for you lol. Everything gets solved within seconds and the author is allergic to real stakes, but despite that? Yeah I fuck with it
Sometimes you need a break, and what you need to turn to is the sloppiest cringe fest of your life. No stakes whatsoever with a silly main character that just does whatever she wants because she can. She is a strong mc too tbh (given the mary sue), but like in a deadass way. Like she did everything from her own power, only going to others a few times for help. Like sure the men played a role, but I def think they are nowhere near as important to the story as they could have been. Whether thats a good or bad thing to you, thats up to you decide
Give it a shot. You might have fun, but go into it expecting smth serious. Its silly and cringe and my beloved hetslop ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
7/10