I feel it’s a little rushed in the beginning but if it is so the rest of the story can progress a bit faster then. The zombies are well drawn in my opinion. Startled me.
Does this bother me that they are related and in a relationship and they know they are related? Yes but only a little.
Is the story good? Yes it is.
Should I be concerned about the murderous brother? Yes do I care? No.
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That expression in the last update chapter 9 when this was wetting was funny. The last panel. The mortified expression was funny and well drawn.
Da hell did I just read. My brain is now corrupted with this stuff. Lord have mercy on me.
I am going to find a way to kill people from book dimensions. I hate that damn bastard so much. I need a gun that can kill people in different dimensions and I won’t get in trouble because guess what I’m not from that world. I’ll make him die in the most painful way possible and the most humiliating way as well. He deserves to rot in hell no even lower than that.
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I read all 40 chapters in one day. It was good but I have to say the guy at the casino I knew he was trash. Overall the story is amazing.