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so the art and translation all that is good but the plot is just ass bro. The girl is literally spiraling from guilt and shame after being POUNCED ON by the Marquis in the FIRST CHAPTER. This guilt and shame and self loathing drives the entire plot. How to am I supposed to enjoy my SMUT when she has to be coerced into EVEN LIKING the man she’s fucking and God forbid the girl uses common sense and just says the objective truth about the matter to her so called “boyfriend”. she’s to busy pitying her sorry ass life that she won’t wake up and do something about it or at least change her perspective. Overall wayy too angsty and predictable!
The story is a solid 7.5/10, has a consistent plot with likeable characters and cute couple what would bump it up to 8 is if it was uncensored. Definitely one of the better josei stories, should be more popular