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This is cute but i want the seme to open up a bit more... Idk it just feels like the uke is the only one putting in effort and being anxious all the time. I like stoic characters but for this story I think it would've been a little better if the seme grew more caring and loving towards the uke (in volume 2 especially) , bur maybe that's just me being nitpicky. Regardless i like the story a lot. It 's pretty decent