I feel like the story keeps making excuses for ml while barely acknowledging how badly he hurt mc being emotionally immature or bad at communicating doesn't excuse ghosting someone for seven years especially when you know they're going through something as devastating as losing their family and mc forgives him way too easily. I don't mind flawed characters, but ml never really seems to take responsibility for what he did his emotional immaturity is constantly used as an excuse and honestly their relationship doesn't feel earned at all.
Yes I agree. I had to suspend my belief a little to enjoy that part of the story. I speak from experience, going through something traumatic like grief alone stays with you and you never forget who abandoned you when you needed help the most. Personally I wouldn’t have forgiven him and it also wasn’t a good reason either. Loss and illness is the most vital time when a partner is supposed to step in and be there for you IMO.
You wrote three different couples and all three involve non consensual sexual acts rape or violations of personal boundaries you had three separate opportunities to explore three different relationship dynamics and somehow you managed to put the exact same thing at the center of all three Truly congratulations what an incredible display of creativity
god forbid it gets tiresome when nonconsent happens three times in a row. (even if you dont mind it the same thing all over again is staggering the story) not to mention the last one is especially gruesome, the first ones at least had some kink value but it's just straight up getting worse. If you want non consent why wouldn't one of the 3 pairs be enough. Nobody was making a fuss, just stating their opinions but you went out of your way to reply to someone's comment instead of "letting it go".











Umm so when are we getting the chapters where Shin and Jake are middle aged and have kids I have way too many demands