I am trying to give this a chance to turn around; but it really has a strong and disturbing tone. "Domestic" violence is not something to be toyed with.
I see no suggestion of such. Can you point me to the manga pages you seem to have added on to this?
Chapter 1: pages 18 & 19
Chapter 2: pages 13 & 14
Chapter 3: page 12
These are the actual incidents, but as we read the story, they remember more. For the "victim", acceptance had become an accepted norm; which is VERY common in domestic abuse situations. For the abuser, there is remorse and a self aware lack of control, also common. This is not kink, which would be mutual consent, it is on the edge of abuse and I am reading in hopes that the abuser can gain control so it can become a good love story; one where love overcomes a tragic and dangerous set of situations.
Great story as it stands by itself; but I REALLY can't feel sad that this is the end of the story. There should be so much more!
Sometimes, you come across something special; this story is one of those times. I wish there was a special rating we could give to this story ABOVE 5 stars.
The story concept and main characters are great; but there is way too much negative stereotyping. Being gay does not mean being a constant sexual predator. I think the bar staff and customers can be easily toned down on the stereotyping, and become more connected and supportive of the main characters.
Whoops i meant a like sorry
This is simply one of the best stories about self awareness and discovery I have read in a LONG time.
I can't wait for more!
This entire new twist of history revelation in beyond and expectations. I LOVE the way it is being fleshed out and can not wait to see where it leads. So many possibilities!
It's about time! Now to the good stuff.