I understand that Yuki and Yuuta are the same person BUT I feel like it's quite wrong when the author illustrates Tomohisa having it with Yuki. It looks even more wrong when the author tries to illustrate Tomohisa & Yuuta are parents and Yuki is the child. It feels like he's having it with his son(?) which gives me a bitter aftertaste. I think the storyline should be:
After Tomohisa saved Yuuta -> he went straight to the closest hospital or clinic (so Yuuta can be diagnosed) -> Tomohisa are well aware Yuuta isn't "Yuuta" -> Tomohisa treat Yuuta, the one now "Yuki" suitable with his mental age (as a child) -> no romantic relationship involved (just a platonic love as a father and son) -> (continue with the original plot, Yutaa trigger) -> confession and Tomohisa finally look at Yuuta as a lover
The last conversation seems off to me too. Yuuki and Tomohisa talk to Yuki as a child, so I don't think it's appropriate to make the conversation goes
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"I think I like girls" "Yuki is straight?!" "Are you alright, who doesn't have to do it with ME, y'know?" "No! Yuki only want to do dirty thing with Tonohisa!"
it sounds like incest, tbh.
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whatever is the reason, that dialogue gave me mixed feelings but this is just my opinion. I don't have DID nor did I have a close member with DID. I think the story can receive an infinite star rating if this series accurately represents DID. The reader can also gain new knowledge about DID without making any wrong assumptions.
where did that mom come from? If she is truly Asian, she'll be proudly bragging about her son are so good with programming with the next door neighbour. I'll be proud to have a son who is super good with programming?
Or does she want her son to be a doctor?
There are still asian parents who think programming or anything to do with technology and typing in a place that's not an office building won't get you enough money to live off of. They're so confusing
I think it has more to do with being a hacker than programming itself especially if you're doing something that lands you in the police station. Like when people find out my son has a criminal record, how is she going to save face with the rest of community?
Oh, that's an interesting point too (but yeah, I'll still be proud of my boi being able to hack someone)
"I can't give birth to your children" "I'm sorry too, I can't give birth to your children too"
the best (and realistic) line ever in BL story!! (✿◡‿◡)
THAT'S IT, OMAGAH, EVERYONE, THIS IS A REVOLUTION! "Don't drive yourself to the corner, talk with me" T-this just... the most healthy representation of BL! Makita and Bessho are the best couples, I've ever seen! I SWEARRRR to the BL god! It's so cute!! I think it'll really worth it to support the author, SO I already brought the official English translation in Futekiya. To those who want to support the author same as me, here's the link!
https://read.futekiya.com/comic/5e76b1e81f125
"THIS IS A PURE FAVORITISM!!"
Oof, why? jealous? (¬‿¬)
Tia, based on my experience, a man with handsome and charming looks is someone you should be always put up your guard up. You'll never know when will he stab your back
To those who said hyung is a trash, take back your word. This guy wait for an eternity just for his lover
SALUTE TO HYUNG! (눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)
Sir of pink and purple hair, first, you're hot (and my type). Second, I know you're going to be the 2nd male lead (and I've 2nd ML syndrome).
I beg you, please stop wasting your time and love, create your own story and move on with someone who will love you as much as you love em (me). you're too hot and kind to be wasted for someone who... will not even choose you, in the future. (marry me, please)
Sincerely, your secret reader
Also, Hwan is a freaking creep. I'll choke him and yeet him out to the cliff if I can.