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This had a great premise for the story, however current development... Seems to have lost the story's essence?
The MC's skills were plausible from his background - acting honed through cons up to 30s(?) age.
The skills developing further in the theatre arc was great to see since a relationship was also formed with the father figure.
But the descent into different personalities seems abrupt when taking into consideration that he did not show such symptoms with his previous life of acting out different personalities for cons.
Plus, there's a great sense of disbelief needed with the current lore: the story seems to require delving into the realm of disbelief for supernatural stories with its current progression (Low-key expecting a possession to be the viable reason for such disconnect with MC's background).
Plus, it's a pity that his biological father wasn't mentioned as even a passing thought when he was out of the limelight for 3 years.
Will probably just check out random chapters in hopes it gets back to the lore-believable interesting plot. Comments on latest chapters are appreciated as it's a great gauge of when the random chapter can be looked at. ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Main story ends at chapter 80. Hoping for side stories though.
Ending pace was pretty rushed, but feels fit for the genre of horror tropes.
Honestly, the memories thing is apt for their return to a normal life.
Doha would not have murder memories and would not be that much of a sadist/psycho towards Bada (hopefully), and they could have more couple-like interactions. And with Bada remembering, he wouldn't have any curiosity as a horror-fan to check out the site in search of a missing cousin.
Hope the side stories, if there are any, would have callbacks to moments during the game:
-Pigtails - hope Doha has an urge to play with Bada's hair
-Noodles dish - wish Bada requests it from Doha, and Doha seemingly wonders why he isn't as fond of the taste anymore
-Bestfriend - have the friend see Bada in a cute hairstyle, calling him an angel and becoming friends (this would enable some jealous Doha scenes)
-Side couple - maybe Bada could help be a cupid for the side couple in a side story
-Promised reward - this may be the thing I would accept for Doha to remember, especially during a college vacation so they can make the promise true