READ AT YOUR OWN RISK.
Shitty climax, shitty ending.
Let me rant, I really can't comprehend what happened. I let this one marinate cuz it was interesting waaaay before.
Good plot from the start, very unique. Unfortunately went downhill. What the hell is that climax with the demon king? That's the weakest demon king ever seen/read. He looks like a incubus instead of demon king, he doesn't even look evil/menacing. And the hell are those fight scenes?? It's all over the place. That blond villianess, I thought she was smart and cunning but turns out she was dumbified, really girl you let yourself be known that early? And it looks like the evidence they got from wat she did was for absolutely nothing. (Well it did something behind the scenes, but still I thought it was crucial)
And suddenly FL got buffed with her divine powers?? Then why tf it didn't happen on the first timeline? She is the decendant of the saintess yet on the first timeline she can't use her divine powers? She could've least know from the dream she had powers or something. The mark in ml's face is a seal for a warrior? Ml literally defeated the Demon Lord tho, why didn't the mark disappear there?? It disappeared when they ****ed. And what's the point of having their kid as a warrior then? They don't have the marks too, ML got abused for nothing then???
I'm no author but atleast stick to the main plot and avoid too many plot hole. Author just gave us a god statue to explain someshits but doesn't really help that much. (Idk I just skimmed the chapters after the fight with incubus lord cuz its a waste of time.)
I'm disappointed, you could've atleast let us see the kid with black hair and pink eyes. But no you gave us the typical white hair babies, there's two of them!!!!!! Shouldn't we atleast have one black haired kid with pink eyes? They would look cuter!!!!!
Wdym Elder sis and Master of the Black tower didn't end up together??? THEN A BUNCH OF OTHER CHARACTERS HAVE LOVE LIVES INSTEAD OF THE TWO???? You have to be kidding me. Author's ragebaiting us at this point.
I don't wanna reread this one. I mean horray happy ending, ig.
Disappointing in the end :v
Even the God's past is kinda meh esp in the end. It flopped esp when the villains' end didn't give any satisfying ending, I don't mind the art change(well, a little) but the villains went downhill lmao. I don't understand cuz it feels like they want me to symphatize with the villains? Imo.
The Father and Brother deserved so much more despair than that. The other guy, other mom and ML's mom too. Lmao Gabrielle just fucking cried the whole time and didn't even know she swallowed the blood. Their karmas were too shallow for my liking. Esp through the 7 lives FL went through. Sis that ain't suffice.
Wrap it up guys, girliepop wanted to become a princess/royal before, and now a young prince asked her to dance, girliepop reminisced. Girl are you fr? ( ̄∇ ̄")
"It was a silly childhood crush" The part they were blushing, made it sussier imo cuz it wasn't necessary. There are stories with that kind of stuff too but I don't think they made the OLDER one react that kind of way.
Ofc people are gonna misinterpret and assume things, esp since there are authors who are actually fine with that stuff. In conclusion, it should've been executed in another way. Tbh it ruined the "wholesomeness" vibe around the two.
Don't blame the others for being uncomfy cuz that shit is hella suggestive. Hopefully it wasn't the author's intention to write them that way. I'll forget that I saw that chapter.











If you think Julianne deserves Michael more than Cedric then you don't know what Lia actually *wants* at all.
If you think Lilianne deserves Carlise or Aiden more than Joshua, then you don't know what Lili *needs* at all.
As much as I'd like to explain what I meant, I think its better to think in Lilianne and Julianne's perspective and experience that was shown in the story. Although I do love a good angst and redeemption arc, I believe love doesn't need/have to be complicated! :)
thissss!!! Julianne wanted someone who can love her and her loved ones and Michael certainly wasn't able to do that. Cedric on the other hand, genuinely showed love for Lili even if ut wasn't for Julianne and that's what made Julianne love him.
And I don't get people who don't like Josh, he choose to stay with her at her lowest times. Even though hhated the fact that Lili sees him only as a family by how close they got. He chooses to stay and make sure she didn't feel lonely and what more can Lili ask for when the one thing she fears— being alone or getting left by people she loves, Josh proved that he, of all people will stay.
That's how I see it, but we all see things differently and at the end of the day this all comes down to preferences