Screaming « please save him » alone in the dark toward the sky was so extra-dramatic haha
The alpha is so cliche, always aura farming and thinking horrible things like « he is my bitch », that it becomes ridiculous. It’s like a grotesque stereotype alpha type wolf sitting on the floor
Hated the parents, hated the alpha : basically everyone try to force their way of living and their idea of future onto the MC who ask nothing, and just want to study and be independent.
The part where the dad is like « I shouldn’t have use the MC’s money to buy something for the baby » (don’t remember the exact words) made so angry, would have lost my mind in this shitty family
Can the uke think for once please. The guy is so useless, and has no backbone. You know the uncle is weird, what are you doing in his room, c’mon grew a brain
I actually hate the uke. The seme is annoying too, but he at least have a tiny inch of personality. Very bad written characters, that therefore have no alchemy whatsoever
Oh no ! Don’t use this crosswalk, it’s a famous pick up place ! And don’t stand precisely 5 seconde on this sidewalk minding your own business, it’s a famous signal code that you are looking for gay rapist !
Looks like I can, myself, write a yaoi now that I have developed this level of story writing, please support me everyone
I meaaaaan not bad, but not good either. The part when the top said « even if you say no, I’ll do it » about fucking, and later in another chapter (and not related to the first occurrence im talking about) is like « I forced myself on you, are you ok? » (the bottom response being something like “it’s ok I love that about you” ?!!) is weird and so unnecessary in this day and aga ugh
The use of « not normal » about dating a man and feeling pleasure when being the bottom… the association of cuteness with bottom, then with female… sigh
The veins on the alpha’s arm are sending me out, one minute it’s ok and the next they are everywhere on his arms when he is just sitting eating ramen