I love this manhua so much—the depth and non-cliché writing really drew me in and made me emotionally invested, which isn’t easy to find. That said, there are a few things that disappointed me: :(
The writing and worldbuilding can be convoluted. Some chapters are so dense that translator notes are needed to follow the story, which feels like it shouldn't have to be necessary to understand the plot details given how many chapters there are to explain things properly.
I didn’t like the brother-sister love subplot. I’m glad she ultimately saw him only as a brother, but it felt unnecessary to the story.
Key character motivations and histories are unclear. For example, Laliete’s discovery that she’s a king’s daughter is just dropped in, and I’m still unsure how certain characters are related or why they act as they do. (for example how is Lalietes dad related to the current royal family????)
Some plot points are introduced but never resolved. Laliete becoming a judge and attempting societal reforms felt sudden, and conflicts like child trafficking are mentioned but ignored.
Despite these issues, I love many aspects of this manhua, which is why I’m reflecting on these points—they confused me while reading but didn’t ruin my overall enjoyment.
I feel iffy about the age range, like the brother from the latest chapter just looks, and feels so much older. Especially since Heesoo was so drunk he passed out, maybe if it developed more, and the flashbacks we saw of him was more of him being an adult. As it stands now it feels so wrong to ship. Heesoo is in an unhealthy state of mind right now from guilt and lostness, he hasn't shown any form of acknowledgment of love, or desire towards the brother besides a longing for comfort in a bad state of mind.
Corse, I could just be talking out of my ass but that's just my opinion
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dojun is 36 and heesoo is 24. they’re 12 years apart. I’m also worried that Heesoo will regret this later, I love him so much and I just wish him happiness ╥﹏╥ even if the sex will be mutual, I hope heesoo is doing it for the right reasons.. im concern . we have not gotten much flashbacks yet so, I think they have more history together
To me it seemed like Dojun had always been watching Heesoo, had always been aware of his presence and there had been a distant longing. I mean, Heesoo's own father seemed to have picked up some interest vibe? That's how it appears to me. And though Heesoo was dead drunk and in a very bad place, Dojun didn't turn him down or away. Really excited to see how Sensei plays out their story. He seems to be a quietly boiling pot, so we'll see!
The age gap does not seem to weird here becaise Hesoo is already an adult and even if Dojun was interested in him since way back nothing happend while he was younger wich does not bother me too much~
I feel like Dojun might be annoying with his "can't reproduce with beta" thingy let's see how it plays out
At times it's frustrating to see her act like a actual child and not show how intelligent she should be. Some moments its so clear what she should say and some of the other characters meanings when their becoming complicated. It feels like there wasn't much purpose at all for having her be reincarnated TT
it feels like as he said in the last chapter (once I learn about something I cant stop thinking about it) is the reason they broke up. Like lets say past boi learns about that they broke up, and from current bois view its over nothing but from past bois choice. He might go back to the past once learning that and then he keeps thinking about it, until he cant stand it, it bothers him, years later he breaks up with him and the cycle continues.









Semes sholders lowkey freak me out bare like that