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I want him to end up with neither of them. Right now, whoever he chooses will just feel like he is holding on to childhood feelings. Maybe the author will manage to get rid of that, but I doubt it. I hope he ends up with somebody not from his past even though it won't happen.
Why didn't he stop when he said to stop? Why? It would have been so easy. Just not draw it. Or don't have him say stop, just have him be alright with the kiss. It would have been fine, but no he had to not listen to him saying to stop. This is one of my favorites. It always makes me smile to see it updated. Why couldn't he have just listened. Now I have to stop reading it. I'm so upset.