beta
This feels too rushed. The main character and ML have absolutely no chemistry yet, and have both been in altered states of mind when they do end up interacting with each other, so we haven’t gotten any dialogue where they connect and talk about anything other than sex or the main characters mission. Plus when they do speak, the ML is yelling at him CONSTANTLY. This needs hashing out
Having a cannibal so close to your penis would be so fucking terrifying