beta
This isnt even the same story. Did the author have a stroke? Why did every character suddenly turn into different people? Going out of character a little can be forgivable if its based on the story flow, but this is pure incompetence. The story went from a ten to a 2.
I am not in love with the idea of a romance arc. When stories pull in a love story, the original plot gets lost almost every time. I do not want to go on a journey of love for cripes sake, I don't care how okay of a character she is, and she really is just meh, I fear for the future of this one.