Too much is going on, when things could
Get easily solved by talking. Ik the point is to draw out the story but it could’ve been done better rather than him failing for the same trap, and on top of that seo in getting arrested made no sense. He should’ve called the cops on his way there so he couldn’t be framed











Ik it’s bad and not something to be fetishized BUT other than that part, the smut it good and the plot lowkey is something new and not the typical copy and paste