this read is cheesy and cringe, yet it still melted my heart in more ways than one. worth reading if you feel like kicking your feet and giggling to yourself at 2am
love the fl but the mother’s actions and motivation completely dont line up…there are so many better ways to go about doing that
if ur talking abt her parents parting, i think its the typical:
“i don’t want him to be sad when i die so ill make him hate me so he can move on” type of thinking not the best way to go…
waste of my time 0/10 i thought this was something different and then it’s TOO different. what in the ever loving fuck they’re both terrible people like actually
i think in theory, this story has potential. but i feel like the art style and the expressions of the characters feel so rigid at times and that kinda spoils it for me ngl…
THIS!
some parts were very poetically written…although more closure would’ve been nice!