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It's easy to read then its good.
Also, really tho... Why did they had to climbed instead of making little stairs. That would be more stable than climbing. The mc has lots of magic anyway. They can also just erase it after use can't they? I also questioned the girl with earth magic, didn't they said they can tell what good soil or not or was she just nervous. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
All in all it's cliche but still good read.