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The mc is so damn cringe sometimes... But thank gosh he's changing in the latest chapters he's becoming kinda cool, he's op tho and i like the romance but i wish they can make it less forced. And I like that there are female characters that aren't head over heels with the mc and the Heavenly Demon guy(forgot the name) is kinda hot but his personality lowkey trashy good I like that he kills bad ppl tho and the potential fl is soooo pretty and reliable and cute too like gurl yes slay
Okay, seriously, please stop dragging this shit out. It's good and all but we're almost at the end and a story will never be perfectly complete IF YOU KEEP STRETCHING OUT THE LORES AND EVERYTHING. The unnecessary death, the stupid harem fan service, and the illogical struggle like bro we ain't reading this with our eyes closed, the struggle of every character even with the power ups isn't even making any sense anymore
If you're gonna end this, end it properly. Make breeder succeed and have a sequel that people will save humanity or sum shit if you actually love the concept of this but the fact that you keep throwing unnecessary things like new insect dna in suchan, training arc that barely had anything, etc. isn't going to make the ending unforgettable. (〜￣△￣)〜
Also since you're giving Suchan a romantic interested please at least make him loyal sure he might be clueless with romance since he has no experience but no person with common sense would let a girl hug and touch them like that when they already have someone they're interested in. like seriously, he literally went on a date with the roach baddie multiple times already. Unless he's a player, he won't let anyone get too close to him. (Also the blondie worm and glasses armor makes more sense together)
other than that, it's great, i love it૮꒰⸝⸝> . <⸝⸝꒱ა