beta
I like how this story was set up but everything happens too fast. There are only 28 chaps with 2 side stories. And booiii EVERYTHING HAPPENS SO FAST I BARELY FEEL ANYTHING.
Like, the 'romance' happens in a blink of an eye. All the conflicts and climaxes got solved so quickly in a few chaps. Actually some major conflicts are solved in just one chap?? All the backstories were not explored at all. That kid Shio has some obsession/love/daddy issue with the King but it was never elaborated? What actually happened to Kline's mom? That the dragon lady who killed her husband? What are the stories behind everything???
I think this story would be so so much better if all the plot points are more carefully executed and the development was more natural rather than super rushed. I rate this 6/10.（￣へ￣）
Is it from the raw? May i ask where did u read it?
Exactly what it said in the title cause bro I gotta pass like 5 rounds of hella difficult exams to get a slot in the Ministry but this cook got it jusT lIKE THAT?? I'M JELLY （/TДT)/