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It was a cute and funny read but does anyone else hate the fact that he ended up being the one the top was looking for? Like, it kinda makes them getting together and figuring things out less impactful, plus it felt like a lazy addition by the author. It'd be better if they got together despite the top previously devoting his life to someone else, and him finding new meaning in someone who hasn't passed, y'know? The rest of the story was good though!!
But I mean the thing that happened in their childhood is what made them meet each other like MC needed ML and ML needed MC for me it's all pretty logical but I get what you mean
Probably just another bullshit bargain to make the manwhore ML’s feelings seem more genuine.
I mean, who would believe the a slut-faced-manwhore piece of garbage like him is capable of love?
He loved the MC yet he’s out there busting his junk into any hole??
I don’t care about his constitution. I wished MC had sex with others. So unfair that his cherry got popped by a manwhore slut-face hoe bag prick
The next thing the author should draw is Yuri, they're so good at drawing women I need a whole story dedicated to them.