Tbh I read the comments first before starting this and there was plenty of " it's good but the story needs some cleaning up, its too messy" and tbh I agree, I believe the main story is freaking good but how u portray it is so messy, I don't know how to pinpoint it but it's just everywhere. Although I love how the past Suhan is getting a little glimpse of what made the new Suhan fall for his husband, but I do hope it won't mess up any other past shit of his.
Either u jobless dude cause of how much time u have posting shit like this or a kid looking for some attention that no one can give cause of ur shitty attitude (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸
Tbh I read the comments first before starting this and there was plenty of " it's good but the story needs some cleaning up, its too messy" and tbh I agree, I believe the main story is freaking good but how u portray it is so messy, I don't know how to pinpoint it but it's just everywhere. Although I love how the past Suhan is getting a little glimpse of what made the new Suhan fall for his husband, but I do hope it won't mess up any other past shit of his.