can someone ping me when the flashback is over, thanks
using it next time? I don't think its enough sir.. better order more lol
the girls in ch 4.5 is so annoying, such busy bodies. why would you discuss personal matters about someone like some gossip in from of others. Geez.
I can't get use to the MC's new design. ;^; The proportion just feels so funny compare to earlier chapters. He was so cute before but I guess more generic looking. He is more unique now but I can't say in a good way. Can someone convince me its better cuz I want to not be so jaring.
It felt like a crash course to the finish line. T_T
There just not enough tension and built up for the sacrifice to feel meaningful. I know there is a lot happening but most of it just feels very dry. It suppose to be a dire situation with a lot hanging on the line but is not coming across. Also, don't care for the side characters at all--even the suppose 'badass' archer lady feels flat. I wish we develop them more.
There just not enough tension and built up for the sacrifice to feel meaningful.
This uke is annoying as fuck. How do you even make it that far as an athlete with zero confidence what so ever. Doubting yourself is annoying but than doubting someone else that has done nothing but being helpful is so hard to read. People going to the Olympics are highly competitive and their goal is gold. Why is he blaming the ML for wanting it, is so stupid.
