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Idk if its just me feeling this way but the last 10 chapters or so have been so rushed. Like when she decides to go back to him, all of a sudden she snoops around, immediately gets caught and then she has a knife in her hand? and threatens him. Then all of a sudden our genius murderer has a meltdown and kidnaps THE POLICE???????? Huh? Like srlsy? The detective? Like their so much going on with the FL in the first place these last chapters. She goes from calm, to having a meltdown, then depression, then calm again, then she gains the courage to kill him and then not; so she goes calm again, but not really. Idk she has gone through so many emotions in just like 3 o 4 chapters than the other 50+ chapters. Feels almost axed ngl.
i feel the same LOL idk what happened, but the quality in terms of pacing just rapidly dropped. theres no real tension anymore cause each scene is so rushed. the airport section could have been so good but again, just felt so lacklustre - and the detective is already going there solo too? the author should just take a break if it’s time constraints causing the quality of the new chapters to be so bad.
this is so truee!! also the chapters just felt shorter and shorter now, I'm literally so close to dropping this. It's sad tho cause this had the most potential and yet it's ruined now because of how rushed the plot is.
Felt the same
I just want this to happen to me.