Y'all other sites have already got it covered by 20 ch, oh and I can assure you that this one is worth the read & smth you could look forward to in a long-run and also definitely deserves much higher rating I'm talking about 9,3+ which should be a fair baseline, am I glazing it ?? Heck yeeah I am but for a good reason and I'm down to go full length of a paragraph stating how this is one of a gem of newgen(2026) Rofan
Bitch the ML piss me tf off
allat signals & advice, you'd expect him to act like a man for once the next day but nooo he just had to run off after supposedly giving her a 'gift' like...what are you ? A third rate Isekai tsundere heroine ??? And the way he shouted 'you can't!!!' tfym by that, god forbid a woman want to pursue her dreams which what makes her happy the most btw instead of being a trad wife and his speech afterwards was just so embarrassing. Also no apology whatsoever after he neglected the FL, Istg girl just end the engagement atp any make lead will do except him.
Thoughtless, uncaring, low emotional intelligence, indifferent, emotionally immature, unapologetic, self-absorbed, devoid of compassion and the list goes on
Everyone in that Hailey's county or wtv was so fucking slow during the chaos that's unfolding for some reason holy fuck
the whole drama that could've been easily resolved within 1-2 chapters and yet the author decided to drag it by pulling a child show level of villain reveal with an extra yapfest on the side, ughh also they didn't miss a single moment to dump in unnecessary dialogues and redundant interaction it actually felt like I was playing hoyoverse's games and that's not a good thing. idk who to blame anymore the premise was great but the conflict was ahh while the closure was lackluster.
And one thing, the FL just pmo if she wanted to finish the game rq and go back to her own world she should've revealed her face long ago & use it as a charm to makes things easier on her end, why would she troubled herself by being a stubborn dumbahh taking a role as an npc or bystander if in reality it's the very thing that could hinder her own progress
Even if Charon managed to learn the truth shortly after he clashed with Ferdin ( well it was acc Aaron that finally knocked some sense to him ) it's still irritated me like how could you take your stepmother's side whom you don't even share a single drop of blood over your OWN biological sister after all these years, ik he's essentially a victim of grooming done by that bitch but c'mon even a fool could catch the sign faster than him if they were placed in the same situation.
See, this is why i don't really fw with the writing that'd intentionally make some of the closest people around MC an idiot and oblivious to things for the sake of the plot, I mean sure it's effective if executed right but man do I still get annoyed whenever it happens
Yeah no shit I have already mentioned it mr smarty-pants, the thing is had the author expanded their past from exclusively Charon's pov more to show how their dynamics before also when did the relationship turned sour overtime bc of the grooming and to justify the aftermath I wouldn't be here voicing my opinion. I'm pretty sure in the novel ( if there's any ) this part would've been more fleshed out more
You're all good. My main point is just when you're groomed it doesn't matter how booksmart or streetsmart you are, the person who is grooming you will always be one step ahead; and I think the mother used the time he was away from his sister to her advantage.
I think that's also what you were trying to say?










Not the author pulling a real daughterslop when this manhwa could've gone better without this cheap ahh subplot sigh also the conflict with the crown princess was resolved rather fast than I had anticipated