beta
I am really trying with this one. The art and the idea of the story are exactly what I am looking for but there are just so many parts that feel disconnected. I think a scene continues and suddenly we get teleported to a completely different location and setting. Things happen but it doesn’t feel like we are taken along with the characters thoughts and actions very well. From what I understand the novel is really great and I am happy to hear that but so far the drawn version is pretty lacking and should not need people in the comments supplementing information or parts that are missing here.