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monkeyp March 2, 2024 10:03 pm

This story started strong, I truly enjoyed seeing ersella develop and repent for being a terrible mother. I enjoyed seeing her character interact with vincente. The depiction of post partum depression was great imo, however…everything else was lacking. they set up so much potential for her politically just for everyone to diminish her for being a woman, which in the end she gave into all because she “loved” her family? Vincente even accepted being disowned for her and the author throws that all away to set up a three chapter “resolution” for their relationship, which was terrible and had no substance other than what i thought was going to be her recovering from being with an emotionally abusive man. Vincente had nothing to do with the ending either…he had helped ersella throughout the whole series, just for him to end it off on “the man who was terrible to us both is actually worth it”.

The conclusion for Ersellas sister was terrible. She was abused by her husband, used by her brother and father, but was used to resolve Harzens execution because the king was actually in love with her?! She didnt get shown any respect, and was only used for her son even though she was apparently so important that she “caused” time to go back for her sister she cared for.

It felt like this author built up these characters, then turned around, decided they wanted to resolve everything all at once, then turned everyone into morons who did all of this for love?? Harzen was basically just a bad guy but not really, seeing as how he caused the most turmoil in the story, yet is the only one who came out unscathed? The only turmoil he felt was whether his obsession with Ersella made her sad or not.

Im upset this story was as bad as it was because it truly didnt have to be. The political aspect only felt like it dragged on because the author forced the romance in there and made Ersellas development relapse at any opportunity, then used Vicente to build her up again, or used Harzens tiny amount of basic decency to make us feel like he “truly cared for her”. Dont recommend this to anyone who values a decent relationship, story building, or ending. The after story of what happened before she time traveled had a stronger sense of character development than anything in the main story. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    Rodtv March 4, 2024 3:34 am

    You couldn’t explain any better. I wholeheartedly agree with you. The beginning and the trauma Ersellas when through were really good. But it’s just so strange that after everytime the couple fight, they act like nothing has happened.
    Also, Vincent, The queen, king’s lover background & development are basically glossed over.

    HoshiHoshi March 4, 2024 12:35 pm

    RIGHT????? The beginning was so much good, the middle was getting ok BUT THE END IS HORRIBLE

    monkeyp March 5, 2024 6:46 am
    You couldn’t explain any better. I wholeheartedly agree with you. The beginning and the trauma Ersellas when through were really good. But it’s just so strange that after everytime the couple fight, they ac... Rodtv

    There practically was no need for the Rodente family to be there besides Juan being what felt like an attempt to be a second male lead. The family added nothing that actually ended up mattering other than, of course, saving Harzen when he literally didnt deserve it. He rebelled, killed multiple families, yet got off in the name of "love" and everyone else just agreed??

    Rodtv March 6, 2024 4:07 am
    There practically was no need for the Rodente family to be there besides Juan being what felt like an attempt to be a second male lead. The family added nothing that actually ended up mattering other than, of c... monkeyp

    Exactly! Ersella should have a confrontation or something with Harzen. Just love is not enough of an excuse for all those acts.

monkeyp February 27, 2024 6:58 am

Love the art, the storybuilding so far, cant wait to see where it goes!

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broke August 10, 2020 7:44 am

ngl mangago gotta be da only place where u can say “rape is bad” for one of the yaois and its fucking controversial

    Wolfgang August 10, 2020 7:44 am

    Ppl rlly be ready to fight the literal law on here the clownery

    constantine August 10, 2020 7:45 am

    dude no shit i said that a 39 yo shouldnt date a 17 yo and got 29 likes n 60 dislikes like bro????? where was i wrong???

    broke August 10, 2020 7:58 am

    literally seen catfights over someone sayin “i dislike the rape in this” and that shit will get ratioed and start a 59 comment argument over how the rape was necessary to advance the plot like pack it up kevin spacey

    Naomi August 10, 2020 8:01 am

    Argument bingo:
    "It's just fiction"
    "It's in the tags, check before reading it"
    "Then why did you read it?"
    "Dude chill it's yaoi"
    "Ugh why do you have to be so negative?"

    Naomi August 10, 2020 8:02 am
    Argument bingo:"It's just fiction""It's in the tags, check before reading it""Then why did you read it?""Dude chill it's yaoi""Ugh why do you have to be so negative?" Naomi

    Like personally I sometimes do seek out weird/bad stuff to read, but I don't know why people are bashing on those who dislike it or are feeling uncomfortable

    broke August 10, 2020 8:07 am
    Argument bingo:"It's just fiction""It's in the tags, check before reading it""Then why did you read it?""Dude chill it's yaoi""Ugh why do you have to be so negative?" Naomi

    u rlly listed out every counter point they say LOL, its insane how much they get irked by someone disliking rape in yaoi

    broke August 10, 2020 8:12 am
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    girl what

    HitMe_ August 10, 2020 8:21 am

    Well. This is literally almost a porn site and people who spend most of their time in such places reading that kind of comic is either just for a quick fun time or maybe just bored or else idk

    But tbh its not like the world is black and white and its not like we can point out 'the bad people easily' but through how they react to our opinions on such topics is how we perceive their views.

    So um. I think lets just make ourselves better in life (self love self improvement and such y e a) and while on it we remind others too! Yes we may not help much but at least we are spreading the good vibes yey


    Rip english

    Kunyomi August 10, 2020 8:36 am
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    wtf?...

    broke August 10, 2020 8:38 am
    wtf?... Kunyomi

    naw they just baiting, dw theres always weirdos like dat

    shinsobb August 10, 2020 8:57 am

    omgggg I remember there was this one manga where this little kid had a crush on the mc woman and she started hanging out with him and blushing and shit and it was super weird and then when someone pointed out that she’s a groooomer there was a whole debate where people were literally arguing that love is love and age doesn’t matter bc it’s an innocent love or whatever like............ ok pedo

    shinsobb August 10, 2020 8:58 am
    omgggg I remember there was this one manga where this little kid had a crush on the mc woman and she started hanging out with him and blushing and shit and it was super weird and then when someone pointed out t... shinsobb

    like imagine having that convo irl
    absolutely mad

    broke August 10, 2020 9:14 am
    like imagine having that convo irl absolutely mad shinsobb

    omg, was it that one manga with the yankee boy??? i remember reading a few chapters but i thought it was overall p weird

    yoyoswaggg August 10, 2020 9:22 am
    dude no shit i said that a 39 yo shouldnt date a 17 yo and got 29 likes n 60 dislikes like bro????? where was i wrong??? constantine

    wtf?? i thought the authors at least followed the 18+ age limits... like that's the bare minimum u can do...

    Kunyomi August 10, 2020 9:26 am
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    yeah, you did.

    akku August 10, 2020 10:25 am

    FR tho

broke March 12, 2020 1:13 am

yaoi with a handsome stalker dude, who tries to give sweets to the uke (I think), but all I know fo sure is that near the end, the ukes house kept getting broken into but it turns out the perpatrator was a lesbian lady who thought her gf was (cheating? or thought he liked her) that or she mixed up the room numbers cuz her gf was the ukes neighbor. also the stalker seme decorated his room after the uke (or vice versa). ik this is very confusing but it's been a fat minute since I've read this. please,,,,help,,,

    3msuge March 12, 2020 1:39 am

    Otte otte, koi o shite? I think it’s this one?

    broke March 12, 2020 1:43 am
    Otte otte, koi o shite? I think it’s this one? 3msuge

    no, but thank you for looking! the seme was I believe, somewhat rich and the uke worked at a gas station? something like that

    3msuge March 12, 2020 1:52 am
    no, but thank you for looking! the seme was I believe, somewhat rich and the uke worked at a gas station? something like that broke

    Okay I believe this is the actually one? Thought it’s shounen ai. Ore to Omae no Stalker Boushihou

    broke March 12, 2020 2:04 am
    Okay I believe this is the actually one? Thought it’s shounen ai. Ore to Omae no Stalker Boushihou 3msuge

    yes it is!! omg idk why I thought it was yaoi but tysm!

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