Hey! IDK Maybe don't leave alone the already bullied boy and communicate with him in a healthy way. You know, so he doesn't get extremely guilty, depressed and gets more traumatized and lonely.
I want to do a review, but my english is very bad, sorry. About the story: I don't know. The art is very well done, so I give it points for that. But, it was a big drop in quality from the first part to the last two. The mother story was interesting, raw but realistic and sweet. It also give room to breathe and has a good peace. The second part feels kinda unnecesary, with all the characters who don't have much purpose. The two friends don't have much agency, and I feel they only exist to show how good the main character is. The third part was pretty much rushed, wanting to show the lost sister soquick and also getting rid of the brother in such a way, like he wasn't important, even though he was present since the beggining.
Also, is kinda weird how the author want to propose this idea of pure love. There is no justice in this manhwa. The point is so fixated that, the story kinda stops being believable. The rapist has a epiphany and basically kills himself (yeah, I know he give the weapon to the sister, but you get the point), his wife tries to kill a person but is also forgived. Worst of all, they hold hands in the dream and everyone is happy. I get the point that the author is trying to make, but, c'mon.
Finally, what I liked in the first part was how direct it was. Woman has a tragedy and has to learn to live/love again, deal with the problems and be happy. Discovers love and has a family again after losing one. And she made it. Every chapter, she have a new insecurity but also a new way to deal with her problems. It was very cool. However, the second and third part was basically tragedies after tragedies: girl lost, father dead, deaf sister, rape, abduction, child abuse, almost-incest, and the list keep going. There is not room to breath. It was basically yelling "This is Misery porn, look how sad all this is, that means is more realistic". I could swear that there is almost not chapter in the last two part where a tragedy or a problem is happening. And the worst part is that there is not resolution. In the first part there is clearly a begining, middle and end. But, here, everything is unresolved for the characters. The father dies without find her daughter, brother leaves and return at the end because he realize what he did was wrong, everything in less than a chapter. The rapist dies and her wife almost kill someone, but is alright, they are forgived. The lost sister never gets real justice, not her father. The two friends apear at the end just because.
I think the author is very talented, but he should plan better his stories. Also, I think because the chapters were so short, there was little room to breathe after every tragedy. I hope seing him in a bigger book, where he can plan better and have a better peace. And also, he needs to understand that not every tragedy in the world is going to happen to only one person and her relatives. When you show so many sad things in a prolonged amount of chapters, the happy ending feels forced. Is worst when this happy ending is less than 10 panels short. Overall, I think the first part works as a standalone work, even better than all the manhwa. That is only my opinion, though.
OMG Chanwoo is pansexual! I think I'm about to cry! (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Maybe is just me, but I have a bad feeling about that old man. I feel like he will do something bad or maybe he will be killed by Seungho. I don't know but is interesting.
Maybe he'll reveal Yoon's secrets((( （￣へ￣）
Fuck, after seeing this, all I want is Na-kyum to escape and find love and confidence by himself, without rapist and assholes hurting him.
BOSS: Is not discrimination!
ME: Oh, how nice...
ALSO BOSS: You will be judged for your heats and because you don't have a partner. In other words, you will be judged for being an omega even though you don't have control over that part of your nature. Also, I'm assuming you don't have the capacity to be a full time employee just for being yourself, even tough I have no problem hiring you as a part time employee and I've never had a problem with you before.
ME: WTFFFFFFFFFFFFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Looooool I was thinking the exact same thing!
Chapter 65 and 66:
https://newtoki23.com/webtoon/253?toon=BL%2FGL
killa said the epiloge is in 10 days
The story was hot but I didn't like Shirotani's father. He was sleeping with a school girl, even though he was way older and also his teacher. And they make it seem like the girl was a bitch (she kinda is towards little Shiro but YK, traumatized kids often traumatize younger kids, she was very obvious groomed and looking for approval) but never adressed the grooming his father inflicted towards her. Like she is annoying but he is a predator and that is way worst. Or how she is old now and never found any sort of justice but everything is ok because she still is a bitch. And at the end, Shiro contacts his father again after many years in this scene that is supposed to be emotional (?), as if nothing happened, as if he wasn't sleeping with a minor, as if the past didn't matter. IDK feels kinda simplistic and gross...
Like you can have mature themes in your manga, but at least be consistent FFS