The art being bad is the least of this stories problems, I have so many questions.
Why do I have no more of an idea of what's happening at ch 22 than I did at ch 1? Why is a child pursuing an adult so aggressively and why is everyone just okay with that? Why are we just casually whipping people for fun and jokes? There's no way being paid in dried fish isn't exploitation, unless this dude has a warehouse of it somewhere they don't show us? And wth is going on between the witch and the little girl with pink hair? They make me uncomfortable..... Also, when is this story even set???
Maybe it all comes together in the end, but nothing so far makes me want to keep reading enough to find out.
It was cute but around halfway I noticed they were telling us what had happened instead of showing us and it was walls and walls of text. On top of that, the last like 20% of the book was just reiterating the first 50% of the book over and over and over and over. I get it, they hated each other, no one thought they would ever get along, but they were secretly in love for years cause no one believed them, it was craaaazy! But also.... is that even true? Did they ever really hate each other? Maybe, but as far as what is actually shown in the story, Peach was annoyed at Tangerine messing with him and Tangerine liked messing with Peach cause he thought his reactions were funny. But nothing actually hateful was ever done as dar as I could tell.
The plot was fine, not awful but nothing to write home about, the drawings were really cute, but the execution of the story left me feeling wanting. So much of the story was a thing happening and then characters telling other characters exactly what happened and you had to hear ever part in at least 3 different ways. I got so bored I started skimming around ch 85 and I skipped the last two chapters completely.