NVM. I'm dropping this. The storytelling is so fvcking D.R.Y. (● ̄(エ) ̄●) Like the author is trying so hard to portray the ML as a green flag and inserts moments to show that, only for it to inevitably come out forced.
...Fine, it was probably so they could fuck sooner, ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍ but gatttdayum was that so rushed and obvious lmao
I don't understand why that helper woman would assume he only needs to eat so little because he 'seemed' sick. Wouldn't a seasoned helper know to actually give more especially knowing that he's pregnant? Like, "no, you should eat more even if you don't feel like it" typa sht. Is she purposely written to be a bitch or what?
No matter how many times I reread this, it always feels like the first time. The author is so good at laying out important points in the plot in the limited number of chapters. Short and sweet, so they say.
Yoshida and his superb emotional intelligence is probably my most favorite thing in this story. Dare I say, he is such an important character that helped the two come together. So important that with a simple, "Is that really how you feel?" he was able to enlighten Midori about the feelings he is not ready to face. Then again, despite knowing Midori's feelings and apparent denial, he is not the type of character that pushed bot MCs to come together, instead he allowed them, Midori especially, to live the realizations on their own, but was also the first to congratulate them when they finally got together. I love his character so much because it's how it should be. I feel that I, as a reader, would secretly hope for a quick solution that would end the suffering of the characters. Then again, if Yoshida was a character that represented me as a reader, then I'm glad I did not interfere, and was patient. Because their love is as bitter as it is sweet with or without external competition or pressure.








Am I the only one having a hard time loading the chapters? (/TДT)/ Not even a single apge loads, it just loads forever ╥﹏╥