Omg why do I always feel the like top always ends up hurting the bottom. And the bottom is always soothing and supporting him even when he refuses to communicate...this kind of feels one sided ngl. The top makes me very uneasy.
The younger bro is the definition of jinx. Shitty character. -2 points to the story becuz of him. He just made everything worse. He shouldn't have gotten a happy ending. Nope.
The random blowj*b scene comes out of nowhere and completely throws you off. When I read this I immediately was like nope thanks and left it. Hate the uke. Nothing cute or romantic about this sorry. The seme deserves better. I feel bad for him.
Uke should NOT have given in so easily. Should have made him beg and crawl on his knees. NOT SATISFYING ENOUGH.
Both mcs were so unlikeable. And if it were me, I would have beaten the living shit out of the director. He pissed me off so bad. But the bottom was pretty fcking pathetic too. Pardon my language but this story got my cortisol levels high.
Did NOT expect the dick to turn into a christmas tree