i feel like this had a lot of potential but the writing was kinda stiff. like when the mom said “you’ll be a replacement for aoi” i kinda wish it was more implied than just point blank stated. more show not tell. interesting concept but could use more depth :<
i feel like this had a lot of potential but the writing was kinda stiff. like when the mom said “you’ll be a replacement for aoi” i kinda wish it was more implied than just point blank stated. more show not tell. interesting concept but could use more depth :<