Why does he make everything harder than it has to be?
Bros like see, I did this bc I knew you wouldn’t really want me and your feelings aren’t pure. When the actual problem is that you LIED!
So he doesn’t know how to love. He likes him a whole lot, can’t admit it, doesn’t want to lose him - and this is the outcome. Just say you love him and move on from this unnecessary plotline please
IDK man, I had high expectations for this since I love the other stories. But currently I dislike all the characters and the plot…
Then don't read
Don't expect before even reading a series each series has their flaws but if you don't like the characters and plot why even read it. If you're feeling confused then just don't read it.
I understand you completely. The characters are kind of unlikable and I'm unsure if this just has to do with just bc it's the start of the stories so I feel like that too.
I feel like it's unfair to tell someone to stop reading just because they have a few complaints about how the story is set up at the beginning. It's a valid complaint. A lot of stories may not start out good but can completely change once the story becomes more fleshed out. That can also get people reading and wondering just when the story might make a turn for the best. That's why I'm still sticking around.
So, I feel like complaining about how the characters are set up at the start of a story and finding them unlikeable is justifiable. Then as the story continues on, you can see how the characters grow and begin to toot for them more.
Plot is good, stick to it for a few more chapters
I gotta ask, are we ever going to get a chapter where the main characters do not have a facial injury?
What funny thing to be concerned about when my shaylaas are facing dangers
The condom from the bed and the line ‘take off your clothes AGAIN’! He cheated! Why couldn’t he just practice with the ML instead of this dude? Does anyone know where we can find the raws, cause I need to see how the ML reacts!
This was a lesson on how to ruin a story in one chapter or less
But like, what was the point of this whole conflict if it’s just swept under the rug and we don’t push the plot forward and no character development occurred? They just wanted to put in a lazy plot twist and r*pe?
"With no character development occurred" brother they're literally changing to fix their issues
You're telling me they only way this character development could've occurred through was the rape and becoming buddies with your rapist plot line? No other plot line? Like the author couldn't have tweaked it to just be flirting? Really?