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So, I have some major qualms about this Shoujo. Where do I even begin?

This Shoujo is absolutely terrible, I cannot understand for the life of me why this is garnering such praise, and a score of 9.3/10. The characters are flat and one-dimensional, there’s no textual integrity, world-building is shoddy and the plot is too complex and hard to follow.

To begin with, none of the character’s actions make any sense. Areum finds herself in an alternate realm and somehow adjusts almost instantaneously? If someone from the 21st century were transported into what appears to be the Victorian Era, I think they’d be more than a little shocked. As the story progresses, it almost seems to forget this plot point and is rendered completely insignificant. What was even the point of the entire ‘reincarnation’ aspect if it isn’t referenced or explored further?

Some parts of the story detail her inner monologue and thoughts, however this is not effectively utilised. This could provide real opportunities to further develop her character, reveal her motivations and her feelings. Following the first few chapters, she rarely, if at all, thinks about that fact that she is somehow in an alternate universe. She doesn't question how exactly she ended up there, or how any of this is possible. She never thinks about her life on Earth, her family or friends etc. Her entire character seems to revolve around her interactions with the Duke.

She is trafficked and sold into the slave trade, facing verbal abuse from society for her appearance and doesn’t seem the least bit bothered by it. She harbours no resentment towards the people who trafficked her, the Duke who bought her and treated her terribly at first or the background characters that attack her. The effects of such a seemingly traumatic experience is hardly referenced further.

Which leads me to my next point. The motivations of background characters attacking her makes no sense. Throughout the shoujo, the fact that he is supposedly a cruel and ruthless man is repeated. So why would his workers attack someone he clearly values, if he has no problem killing them?

The character of Travis/Duke Millard/whatever is also wildly inconsistent. Other background characters continually reinforce his apathetic and cruel demeanour, however the story portrays him as essentially falling in love with the lead upon first glance. He is cold and stoic in all interactions with other people, but as soon as he talks to Areum he blushes and becomes flustered like a schoolgirl? It simply doesn't make sense at all. If he truly is hundreds of years old, a vampire etc., a pretty face isn’t going to do much for him. Nor is someone as flat and uninteresting as Areum is. Whilst I understand she resembles a vampire in whatever universe this is, her character as a whole is not unique or different than any of his other workers. The audience cannot understand WHY the Duke has taken such a liking to her, because the Shoujo makes no attempt to develop either of the leading characters.

The plot is also a major problem I have with this shoujo. The plot is simply too complex and too disjointed that I honestly don't even know where this is going. From what I remember (and I'm not going to go back and reread this garbage), a curse is placed on him, so that he dies if he falls in love with someone? And many people are invested in his death and so plot to make him fall in love? Wouldn't that make him apprehensive of everyone he meets, and wouldn't he be suspicious of Areum?

Following along this plot thread, the Duke is definitely aware of this curse. He knows that falling in love will kill him. So why hasn't he killed her, as soon as he felt himself have the smallest bit of affection towards her? Objectively considering this, he doesn't act like a duke. As this is an alternate universe, I am assuming that societal values are very against classes acquainting with one another and is very frowned upon. So why does he concern himself with Areum when he doesn't care about anyone else belonging to her class?

Their romance plot thread is too sudden. The story doesn’t show their love, but rather shows Areum spouting some sappy shit and him blushing, which again makes no sense when you consider his characterisation. I simply couldn’t empathise with any of the characters because I don’t care about them. At this point, I couldn’t care whether either of them suddenly dies or what because this story is utter garbage.

The only redeeming aspect of this shoujo I can think of is the art style. I, however, cannot think of the reason for the artistic choice to make Areum's eyes so large in comparison to all other characters. It's a personal opinion, but I think it's strange.

To conclude, I am shocked by the amount of praise this has received. Anyone that has read a decent shoujo can clearly see how terribly written this is in terms of the characters and the plot. Characters are bland, the plot is too complex and disjointed and the story does not leave me with a burning desire to find out what happens next. I don’t care about any of the characters, in fact I hate the majority of them. Their actions don't make sense. Either way, I'm already too invested in this and will finish it to see if the shoujo somehow miraculously improves.





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2019-09-19 03:55 marked
I swear it's always a bus that kills someone in these Manhwas
2019-04-12 00:02 marked
this crap finna be only like 10 or 5 chaps, bet.
2019-04-12 00:01 marked
hi, what was the name of this manga? the genre was supernatural/horror. this boy lives with his older sister who gets on his nerves for being lazy and bossing him around. the boy gets so annoyed with putting up with her that he uses a website that allows you to switch bodies with someone else, but you don't know who exactly. you walk through a door, and it makes you switch with another person. I think later on, he finds out that walking through a red door means you will switch with a female body. the first person he switches bodies with is a cute idol girl. while he's in her body, he meets a stalker guy who pretends to be her boyfriend. he figures it out, attacks the stalker, then runs off and falls asleep. when he wakes up, he is next to his sister's dead body. the sister was killed by whoever last had the boy's body. he knows that he'll get the blame because his body was the one that killed her, even if he wasn't the one using his body at the time. he puts her corpse in a refrigerator. at school the next day, he acts normally at first but then has a moment where he cries, I think while a classmate was talking to him. he realizes that now his life is ruined thanks to whoever had his body and killed his sister with it, so he decides that he'll find them and get revenge on that person. at some point, he meets with the idol girl that he had switched with at the beginning. this is where I start forgetting more details... all I remember next is that they team up together to beat this guy, I think they purposely switched so that she could use his strength or something. anyone know what the title is? thanks in advance.
2019-01-25 06:24 marked
So, I just started reading fan fic again and there was a hot shower scene that came up.
Does anyone have any suggestions on yaoi manga with hot shower scenes? I’ve read a lot of manga but I don’t know the ones with shower sex ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄
2018-12-21 15:24 marked
I'M GONNA FIGHT YOU !! COME TO ME WITH THAT BASTARD FIRST !!
2018-11-24 22:25 marked
Hey guys so am bord of uke always getting bullied and teased and being shy in all ,so what am looking for is yaoi where uke teases semé and Provokes him (confident un dépendent sexy uke) but with no shy semé , good art if possible thanks in advance (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ
2018-06-30 20:14 marked
Idk why am I always jealous of the main character in a sucidal state.... eventually they will always have people to talk to them and people to ask if they’re okay... no one cares about me even if I want to tell them they’ll just take it as a joke and at the end of the day I’m always just crying alone I feel so lonely it never feels like anyone is there for me not even my parents... when they know I cut they just scold me so badly and when I tell them, everytime they just say it as a joke and when they scold they’ll just say it and say all types of hurtful that they see from their perspective and they never once care about mine...









I’m so sorry if I rant about it here...I’m so sad and I don’t know who to tell... how Long have I been crying...
2018-06-26 07:44 marked
Hello !
Do you guys know any manga where character 1 likes character 2 and so they kidnap them chain them up dress them like a doll and have their own way with them ? Be it yaoi yuri or whatever the genre
Thanks for any help
2018-06-17 21:47 marked
I can get why people are kinda hating on Jiho now but try putting yourself in his shoes. Yeh ur decision making might differ but the environment he lived in will result in his current personality and attitude. He has low self esteem and trust issues especially with his o'so popular "friends" so yeh uhhhhh try understanding wholey the character before saying negative things i guess?? Cuz real life people might be like this too
2018-03-27 17:11 marked
Does anyone know a manga where one of the main characters (preferably male) tries to get in between the uke and seme's relationship because they are interested in the seme but then they fall for the uke instead?
2018-02-09 16:56 marked
Anime recommendations please. Not yaoi or shounen ai. Anime with two male leads or with bromance. Like ao no exorcist, kuroshitsuji, get backers and sports animes.
2018-01-06 00:17 marked
We all know the fact that a lot of readers in mangago are still underage, calling them names and insulting them for not using their allowances to buy chapters in Lezhin is not gonna help, and not all human on earth can afford to buy every chapter, AND all the people who said "you can't pay, you don't deserve to read" are really inconsiderate they let out words without thinking it throught lack a sense of being open-minded.

Saying that to a person feels like telling them that they don't deserve to go to a very classy restaurant because their poor.

We all have rights, acknowledge them.
We should know when to stop violating other people. And we should know when to stop abusing other people's generosity.

A few might think that I'm way too far from the topic being discussed, but no.
If you fully opened your mind and thinked it through, you'd understand.

I know that manhwa artists are very mad about the whole issue of illegal distribution of their work; and we do understand that if we were to be in their shoes we would understand the situation they're in. I mean come on, you made an award-winning webtoon through all-nighters with great efforts and all u get is your master piece being illegally posted.

But they do need consideration for their readers. It's not everyday you can get things your way. It is a good thing that artists get ton load of international fans but they do need to understand that their is a barrier in terms of money. So not everything they want can be followed ASAP.

Manhwa artists or any form of artist all rely on the income they earn from their piece but before they started, they should've thinked it throught that it's not everyday you'll get your pay. They should know the cons in selling artworks.

Translators shouldn't be thought as bad people who ought to distribute illegal copies. Treating them badly isn't going to help either; these people just wanted to share for sake for those people in need it's like a lowkey robin hood. They help people in need by sacrificing their own.
They shouldn't be bashed, no one should be bashed.

We just need a little considerate . Whether u be an artist or a reader.
U just gotta give and take.
But if things went downhill and what people do is just take and take without considering other people then that's where it's already wrong.
2017-10-13 22:00 marked

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