Honestly kind of hard to read for me and it's not my cup of tea.. art is unfortunately very meh and it's just classic romance drama textbook but it's a little cringe with the character tropes [like Mr 2nd disposable ML who when they both JUST MET literally thinks about protecting him for what(?) It's so on your face that it feels so forced.]
unfortunately I literally started skipping chapters just cause it got so bland with the cliche's and then just gave up..
This is just my personal take on it and I don't yuck anyones yums
nah fr i agree with u
100% + the random part in the beginning where the ML says he tried to do anal on someone w/o her consent was so random?? and the MC didn’t even gaf either
Actually a bit too much to even call this a mystery, the multiverses are getting too out of hand on this one.. everyones reincarnated and it's not really written/disclosed in a clean way..
I feel like people just start slapping on #isekai #theworldisanovel just for the sake of the tag.
Also the sibling + friend who are supposed to have written this bs universe wrote about the brother in such a twisted manner, i'd lose my mind if someone i know used my name and image too if i was personified as like that even in a fictional scenario
I love that our ML is waiting for MC to feel more comfortable and MC slowly opening up more
There has been times at the start that it feels like coercion but this isnt exactly where the MC and ML's background are the cleanest.. so we should literally put that into people's brains
the story's progressing really well and showing us some more character development on both of them. People in the comments are talkin about the MC looking young but as an abused and malnourished young adult at their 22? 23? It checks out
Artwise i like the artstyle being more unique esp the oldschool fashions + phones and it will definitely stick with me compared to other stuff i've read
And in terms of story, i love both of their personalities and i'm still just waiting to see how the drama unfolds
The art wasn't my cup of tea but I read through the whole thing for the story, the characters have really good developments and they tied up their loose ends. It fulfilled the wholesome story people look for while balancing the angst
I fear some of these authors/artist have not interacted with other human beings and don't know how people talk to each other even on a 'oopsie, i mispoke' situation... cause if he deadass on the ugly then the ML is just disgusting
Bro thinks he can make a woman love him in command
Why is there smut in my sad plot
Real question is why is there sad in my smut
Story's cute, very chaebol ahh top and bottom but it's a short story anyways and I enjoyed reading up until the finale where it feels rushed.