I don't mind the plot not existing but why is the smud ending so soon? Normally it was all about the sex scenes and now they're so short and it's always - cut - new morning!
Your can't read this story for the plot because there is nearly non, but now there's even not enough smut! T-T
I started it because the first comments saying it's good but... I don't think so. I couldn't continue because it's just fucking boring. They talk and talk and talk and all they talk about is also shown. It's like watching a movie while someone reads out everything that happens so you can't really concentrate on any of it and a the same time nothing is really happening. I think you could cut out 60% and you wouldn't miss anything. Maybe even 75%.
And the "love" story is so "in your face" and really strange and rapey at the same time. It didn't feel consentual at all. The first kissing scene is so strange and awkward and I hated it a lot.
Also the art it great but for me it feels like every picture wanted to be the best special of all with all the lightning and stuff and I wished some of this energy would be also in the story. But here isn't.
So at all: I can't recommend it except you want to see how not to tell a story.
It's so stupid. I just scrolled through it because I thought maybe it's going to be interesting at some point but no. The best thing I have to say about it: there's no rape. For bl that's really impressive. But else... It's so cliche, you don't have to think or to read to understand everything.
Depending on the comments in thought it would be very bad, but in the end it was mostly a very normal yaoi. Yes there was some bad behavior in the beginning but than it was just cute. The last chapter is pseudo incest. If you don't like it, you can skip it very easily
Is the ending, that with every special manju comes sex with a child? And the brother doesn't know what his little brother does?
It shows very well how different a relationship can be seen. And how easy it is to feel neglected without the other person even seeing any of it. And also why it's important to talk about it instead of just assuming that you know what the other person is thinking
I didn't thought I would like it that much. Even with the time travel stuff it's amazingly realistic. I wish them to showeach other more how much they love them.